иԇкܶҶe(cu)`Сиԇe(cu)c(din)҅
1 Ze(cu)λ(Misplaced Modifiers)
ӢZchZͬͬһ(g)ZھӲͬλӵĺx׃(du)@һc(din)ЇW(xu)]ҕ Ҫ`⡣1. I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.
betterλò(dng)(yng)ھĩ
2 Ӳ(Sentence Fragments)
ڿZУHpɽքZĵľȫԱǕZͲͬӽY(ji)(gu)(hu)˼_(d)@Nrl(f)䌑ԺPЩa(b)fr(sh)l(f)
1. There are many ways to know the society. For example by TVradionewspaper and so on.
벿“for example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on”һ(g)ľӣHһЩB؞~Zܪ(d)ɾ䡣
Ğ飺There are many ways to know societyfor exampleby TVradioand newspaper.
3 ҴZ(Dangling Modifiers)
^ҴZָĶZcӵ߉P(gun)ϵy塣磺At the age of tenmy grandfather died. @“at the age of ten” ֻc(din)ʮqr(sh)]f“ l”ʮqr(sh)һmy grandfather ҂@(g)ҴZ_һc(din)ȫͲôM(fi)ˡ
Ğ飺When I was tenmy grandfather died.
1. To do well in collegegood grades are essential.
вʽZ “to do well in college” ߉Z
Ğ飺To do well in college a student needs good grades
4~`(Misuse of Parts of Speech)
“~`”F(xin)飺~(dng)(dng)~;~(dng)~;~(dng)(dng)~õ
1. None can negative the importance of money.
negative ϵ~`(dng)~
Ğ飺None can deny the importance of money.
5ָ(Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns)
ָҪvǴ~cָ˻P(gun)ϵ壬ȺõĴ~һԇ@һ䣺
Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
(ҽҪã?yn)Ҫİ?x@һԒxߟo_ДλlY(ji)飬l(dng)҂`Ĵ~ָ(du)_˼һĿȻ@(g)ӿɸĞ飺
Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
1. And we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
˷Q~we ͷ~yourselfָһ¡
Ğ飺We can also know society by serving it ourselves.